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p.1 #1 · Landscape B/W


Here is a landscape version of Mt. Shasta. Unfortunately light was fading rapidly and only managed to get a handful of shots. Lost the reflection of the mountain in this version and I am not sure if the duck in the water should be removed or if it should be left. Thanks for any input and suggestions in advance. Barbara





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Feb 29, 2012 at 12:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · Landscape B/W


I prefer this version, but a touch softer.

Duck? I don't see no duck

Bob



Feb 29, 2012 at 12:35 AM
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p.1 #3 · Landscape B/W


Nice shot but n the middle ground and reflections the shadows are compressed to a degree that looks unnatural. The tonal values go from highlights, mid-tones to pitch black. I also like it crop as more of a panoramic...



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Feb 29, 2012 at 01:16 AM
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p.1 #4 · Landscape B/W


Bob, yes the duck is there but he's tough to see.

Chuck, I will raise the shadows so they are not blocked up. I was struggling between to much / not enough contrast. I did think about cropping it more panorama like. I like your version. Thank you, Barbara



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p.1 #5 · Landscape B/W


Barbara, I think removing the duck and its wake would be a good idea, I don't mind the duck and wake there but your mentioning it I thought I would show you what I think looks good and I hope you don't mind me showing your photo and after you have seen it let me know and then I will delete it from my site sense I upload my photo's from my site instead of the forums site, I used content aware to get ride of the wake and duck, and then I used topaz to give it a touch of softness, hope this helps. I will delete the picture as soon as you post a response to this.

Norm



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Mar 02, 2012 at 01:20 AM
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p.1 #6 · Landscape B/W


Norm, thank you for your interpretation of the image. I don't mind you doing a re-work and taking the time to remove the duck and wake. I haven't removed them from image but I did a complete re-work on this, softened the overal image a bit per Bob's suggestion and retrieved detail in the shadows per Chuck's suggestion from the mid ground. I didn't post the re-work though. Appreciate you taking the time, Barbara


Mar 02, 2012 at 01:31 AM
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p.1 #7 · Landscape B/W


Your welcome, I will delete it then, your photo is very nice, make a nice painting.

Norm



Mar 02, 2012 at 02:29 AM
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