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An image shot last week and converted to B/W. Comments and suggestions appreciated. Thanks, Barbara



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Edited on Feb 28, 2012 at 07:31 PM · View previous versions



Feb 28, 2012 at 03:28 PM
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The image is too small to be sure, but it seems at posted it seems to want sharpness. Also, the reeds to me add distraction rather than foreground interest.


Feb 28, 2012 at 05:02 PM
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I have posted a larger image for easier viewing. I will try a version without the reeds and maybe a version removing the
lowest set of reeds in the lower left corner. Thank you for your thoughts.



Feb 28, 2012 at 07:34 PM
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Barbara ... diggin' the tonal value range.

I think I'd crop just below the vertical reed on the right ... using the leading line of it to point upward, The others below it take your eye horizontal.

Cropping out all the reeds seems static to me.
Or you could crop to a partial reflection.











Feb 28, 2012 at 08:13 PM
 

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Great image Barbara,

location? I want to say Mt. Hood viewed from the gorge but doubt it. Not enough snow for one thing.

Nit - seeing pixelation in sky.

regards,

Bob



Feb 28, 2012 at 09:16 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · B/W for C and C


I'd also suggest some re-touching and perhaps some sharpening and a mid-tone bump.







Feb 28, 2012 at 09:59 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · B/W for C and C


I like the edit by AuniPode, but still think this scenary would benefit from being shot in landscape orientation.


Feb 28, 2012 at 10:52 PM
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Kent, glad you like the tonal range I was struggling with making it too contrasty.

Bob, I am glad that you like the image. This is a different view of Mt. Shasta which was shot about 50 miles north of Mt. Shasta. As the crow flies it may be a little closer than 50 miles. I accidentally stumbled onto this spot while exploring the area. I will address the pixelation in the sky.

AntiPode, I seem to struggle with under or over sharpening but I like your version. I will do a mid tone bump as well.

Alatoo, I have versions in landscape mode and I will work on a B/W which I will post later. Thank you for the suggestion.



Feb 28, 2012 at 11:08 PM





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