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another view
another post-processing
I'm starting to repeat myself

Scott



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Feb 22, 2012 at 01:40 AM
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Interesting processing.

Did you put the line in or is that part of the facade?

Bob



Feb 22, 2012 at 01:55 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Baker Chocolate Redux Redux


the bright diagonal is an odd processing effect using a solarization filter. The "real" image has a sharp linear demarcation between directly sunlit areas on top and shadowed areas beneath. Is the diagonal a good element?
I was thinking how I might respond to this image on Critique.
I have no idea. At one level the question is, do you like it or not? Is it interesting or not? Contrived or engaging? Is it just bad?
I suppose one could comment on compositional elements/organization
At any rate, I'll take any feedback I get. I am enjoying playing around.
Scott



Feb 22, 2012 at 02:02 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Baker Chocolate Redux Redux


To me it is a puzzle, an image to study.

Does it evoke emotion, convey a message? No. It is a curiosity piece.

So I will say an engaging image, likely having limited appeal for the viewing public at large.

My thoughts,

Bob



Feb 22, 2012 at 02:13 PM
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Thanks Bob.
Sounds right to me.
Always appreciate the honest feedback and your assessment.

Scott



Feb 22, 2012 at 03:30 PM





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