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thierryl
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Trying out a new editing style, let me know what you think..

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Feb 15, 2012 at 05:42 AM
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The problem with this shot is the "in focus" area on our left, which draws attention. Crop that away and you have a nice shot. (The crop might even remove the bright area in the top right corner)

I would like to see more of "Mom", which would be the case if you'd aimed farther right.

Another slight oddity of your shallow DOF choice is the sharply focused thumb of Mom and the blurred head of the baby. The other way around would be my choice or both in focus.



Feb 15, 2012 at 12:49 PM
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Jim Rickards wrote:
The problem with this shot is the "in focus" area on our left, which draws attention. Crop that away and you have a nice shot. (The crop might even remove the bright area in the top right corner)

I would like to see more of "Mom", which would be the case if you'd aimed farther right.

Another slight oddity of your shallow DOF choice is the sharply focused thumb of Mom and the blurred head of the baby. The other way around would be my choice or both in focus.




Thank you so much!



Feb 15, 2012 at 02:36 PM
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The editing is nice, try out the crops Jim suggested.


Feb 15, 2012 at 04:53 PM
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Jim said it. Once that focus is out of focus its perfect.


Feb 16, 2012 at 05:33 PM





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