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Your landscape nature is alive and well in the first shot. The foreground is getting a lot of attention with its brightness, and the model is very small in the frame.
Double the size of most of these for best viewing and critiquing. 800 pixels on the long side at least.
You cut off some limbs in the setup shots. That's usually not best for people shots.