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A very cute image. My suggestions:
- The image appears pixelated. I'm not sure if this was an extreme crop of the original or perhaps something went a little wrong in your re-size process.
- White balance is on the cool (blue) side. It's not necessarily bad in this case since it gives the image an overall pinkish/blue tone that sort of goes with the hats and the eyes of the girl on the left. Still, it's something you might want to experiment with and see if you prefer one a little warmer.
- The hair of the girl on the right is pretty close to full black. You might want to work on the development a bit to see if you could recover more detail without causing too much noise.
- The fact that one girl is looking at the camera and one not reduces the impact a little for me but if you can resolve the pixelation issue I'm sure it would make a nice print for a proud grandparent.