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Scott

Feb 12, 2012 at 08:29 PM

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Maybe crop tighter from the left? The nose is a bit hot, and doesn't speak much to the significance of the eye.

If possible, achieve one reflection in the eye, to add sparkle and life. It will also be less distracting.

Edited on Feb 12, 2012 at 08:42 PM · View previous versions

Feb 12, 2012 at 08:31 PM

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'fraid it does not work for me, sorry.

Bob

Feb 12, 2012 at 08:38 PM

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I'm left eye dominant so I can relate to it

Feb 13, 2012 at 09:35 AM

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p.1 #5 · EyeOne Display

Thanks guys.
An experiment.
A dud.
Thanks for the detailed comments, suggestions Skarkowtsky.
Scott

Feb 13, 2012 at 08:16 PM


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