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#488 Casual

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Comments Welcome - Thanks ~Jamie

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edit: slight modifications to image per comments.

Edited on Feb 13, 2012 at 04:27 AM · View previous versions

Feb 11, 2012 at 04:36 AM

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p.1 #2 · #488 Casual

I like the idea but less the execution. I lack a bit of breathing space at the top while at the bottom the two little triangles steal unnecessary attention. Also, why so much noise?

Happy shooting,
Yakim.

Feb 12, 2012 at 10:33 AM

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p.1 #3 · #488 Casual

Yah I agree with Yakim... I love angle and the idea but the noise and a couple things distract - such as the wrinkles on one jean leg but not the other. rs

Cheers!

Feb 12, 2012 at 05:26 PM

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p.1 #4 · #488 Casual

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it! I will play with it a bit. The wrinkles in the one pant leg, and the b&w conversion were to add to the casualness of the photo. ~Jamie

Feb 13, 2012 at 02:02 AM

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p.1 #5 · #488 Casual

Revised image uploaded with above comments. This conversion to b&w seems to add noise but it does add a "denim-casual" feel to the photo that the color didn't have. I don't have a noise reduction program as I wonder if that would help. Thanks again. ~Jamie

Feb 13, 2012 at 07:17 AM

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p.1 #6 · #488 Casual

For me, the crease in the denim draws my eyes to it and I don't think that should be my focal point.

Feb 14, 2012 at 11:25 AM

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p.1 #7 · #488 Casual

Thanks Pete for the comments. I will keep that in mind for future shots! ~Jamie

Feb 15, 2012 at 08:45 AM

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p.1 #8 · #488 Casual

It's a simple shot that portrays the theme nicely so I like it.

Feb 15, 2012 at 10:52 AM


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