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PerlaD300
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p.1 #1 · Foggy morning tree....


Welcome your comments....let me know if this is working or need more contrast on the main tree....what else could have been done better? Thanks in advance for your comments...

EXIF: 18mm @ f20 :: 1/30 :: ISO 200 :: tripod mounted

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Feb 03, 2012 at 10:09 PM
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p.1 #2 · Foggy morning tree....


80 views and no resp....i guess then this pic must be dud...


Feb 05, 2012 at 12:55 AM
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p.1 #3 · Foggy morning tree....


No, it's not a dud .
In my case, it's the kind of image that I sometimes have trouble responding to.
But I'll give it a go. I'm a contrast freak, so yes- I'd like the main tree to be darker, and in sharper focus. But how much would that change the feeling of "fog?"
Small nit- I'd clone out the branches on the lower left.
Otherwise, I think it's a fine image- and processed well.
Charlie

Edited on Feb 05, 2012 at 05:57 PM · View previous versions



Feb 05, 2012 at 01:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · Foggy morning tree....


I agree with Charlie. Contrast. Subject matter & perspective is nice and I think some work in PP will raise it a level. Good luck and enjoy the process. art


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p.1 #5 · Foggy morning tree....


Thank you Charlie / Art for your comments...have processed a different picture from the same series...did a bit more aggressive adjustments...hopefully this captures the mood and contrast better...Please do let me know how this fares up...

did the bottom left branch clone out to clean up the picture as suggested by Charlie...

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Feb 05, 2012 at 10:51 PM
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p.1 #6 · Foggy morning tree....


Oh, yes- IMO the additional contrast helps a lot.
Now- about focus . Because my mouth is already open, I may as well stick my foot in it.
Here's a bit of sharpening on the main tree, although it may not be what you want. Let me know if you want me to take it down- no problem.
Charlie









Feb 05, 2012 at 11:17 PM
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p.1 #7 · Foggy morning tree....


Thanks Charlie....i forgot to do the sharpening when i posted the second version but did it later....and didn't had a chance to post it here due to the SUPER BALL game....neways, here is my version (unsharp mask with 0.5% radius and 0% threshold)....i applied the unsharp mask on the whole picture and not just the tree...

and don't mind your picture here....i like what you have done on it... thanks for taking the extra effort...

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