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NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Robin Usagani
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p.1 #1 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

This is the other first boudoir I have ever done. Miss B and Miss S did the session together.

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Feb 02, 2012 at 03:41 AM

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p.1 #2 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Wow very nice. Glad to see you held it together. Both women are very attractive.I really like 2b,4, 6 and 7

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Feb 02, 2012 at 03:47 AM

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p.1 #3 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Yes, very nice! 6 and 7 are my faves! Great job, Robin!

Ron

Feb 02, 2012 at 04:11 AM

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p.1 #4 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

The window lit shots are beautifully exposed, and with few exceptions the poses are very flattering. My only critiques would be:

2 - Even if it was the cleanest one in the world, the toilet kills the mood for me.
4 - You really needed much shallower depth of feel here to avoid looking like a lusty appliance ad.

Feb 02, 2012 at 05:13 AM

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p.1 #5 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Nice set! So many good shots.

#1 I find it cropped too high on the bottom.
#1 - last of the 3. Cover the breast with the arm, not the hand, to make it look natural. It's a series of shots where we are "looking in" on the lady undressing, and she doesn't know we are looking. Putting the hand over the breast is an obvious "tell" that it's a pose.

2a. I don't like the pose. She looks stiff and awkward.

#3 - Love it! My pick for best.

#4. Light is pretty hot on her back, but still very nice.

#5, #6 & #7. Lovely.

The soft lighting throughout is very well done.

Feb 02, 2012 at 01:14 PM

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p.1 #6 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Robin, the critique above me seems to be a good one. I like the "story" and order to these except for the kitchen image. Without a few more images for context it is out of place. I suspect you have more relevant images in the kitchen so I'll stop at that.

Nice work.

Feb 02, 2012 at 01:48 PM

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p.1 #7 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

I think you have done very well for your first foray into this area. I think Jim Rickards put forth some good thoughts with which I would concur. After viewing both sets I cannot help but respectively disagree in one specific area. IMO these sets, both, are crying out for some better post processing. The are very flat and excessively bright. You could enhance your efforts here by punching up the color and contrast and damping down the really bright window backgrounds which take over the images. Other then that you have a reasonable start to your ventures.

Dave

Feb 02, 2012 at 02:00 PM

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p.1 #8 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

How do you crit such a beautiful woman?

Awesome job Robin!

-Jayson

Feb 02, 2012 at 03:05 PM

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p.1 #9 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

McGrattan wrote:
The window lit shots are beautifully exposed, and with few exceptions the poses are very flattering. My only critiques would be:

2 - Even if it was the cleanest one in the world, the toilet kills the mood for me.
4 - You really needed much shallower depth of feel here to avoid looking like a lusty appliance ad.

+1

Feb 02, 2012 at 04:19 PM

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p.1 #10 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

the one thing that struck me as odd is:

why is she so consciously covering her breasts with the dreaded "hand bra" when she is (supposedly) changing clothes, sleeping, etc...

nice otherwise...

greg

Feb 02, 2012 at 05:26 PM

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p.1 #11 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

lighting on the bedroom shots are awesome.

Feb 02, 2012 at 09:44 PM

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p.1 #12 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

very well done.

Feb 03, 2012 at 09:52 AM

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p.1 #13 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Love them, with my only crit being I personally dislike the toilet in the shots.
Some great lighting, and some great poses.
Well done.

Feb 03, 2012 at 12:11 PM

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p.1 #14 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Thanks people. It was the first time for both of us. She specifically said no nipple on the album. Only about 3/4 of the session she finally let the breasts exposed while I take the shots (while still not showing the nipples). Prior to that she always tried to keep them covered so I don't see them. I really didnt feel comfortable asking her not to cover it but I see what you are saying. I hope I get to do this again in the near future. Since I am a guy, I highly doubt I will do a lot of these unless I go to modelmayhem, pay someone or TFP.

Regarding her back being too hot, I am not sure what else I could have done. In order to make her back doesnt lose any detail, I must have to stop it down maybe 2-3 stops and flash her more. That means the blinds will show up more.

Feb 03, 2012 at 01:33 PM

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p.1 #15 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Robin Usagani wrote:
Thanks people. It was the first time for both of us. She specifically said no nipple on the album. Only about 3/4 of the session she finally let the breasts exposed while I take the shots (while still not showing the nipples). Prior to that she always tried to keep them covered so I don't see them. I really didnt feel comfortable asking her not to cover it but I see what you are saying. I hope I get to do this again in the near future. Since I am a guy, I highly doubt I will do a lot of these unless I go to modelmayhem, pay someone or TFP.

Regarding her back being too hot, I am not sure what else I could have done. In order to make her back doesnt lose any detail, I must have to stop it down maybe 2-3 stops and flash her more. That means the blinds will show up more.
I hear you on the hot back problem. You did what you had to.

To be clear on the breast covering. My point was to cover the breast with the casual fall of the arm, not to show it.

Feb 03, 2012 at 10:44 PM

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p.1 #16 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Very flatter images, thanks for sharing.

Feb 03, 2012 at 10:59 PM

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p.1 #17 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Very tasteful. The hole set has a nice feel. I'd crop the counter top out.

-dave

Feb 04, 2012 at 01:55 AM

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p.1 #18 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

nice light

Feb 05, 2012 at 01:34 AM

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p.1 #19 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

Good stuff.

Feb 05, 2012 at 03:49 PM

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p.1 #20 · NSFW - Miss B. Boudoir

I agree with Jim, you lighting is well done indeed.

Feb 06, 2012 at 10:19 PM


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