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p.1 #1 · Luke and Kitty




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  Canon EOS 30D    EF200mm f/2.8L USM lens    200mm    f/2.8    1/250s    100 ISO    0.0 EV  




Nov 15, 2011 at 01:34 AM
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p.1 #2 · Luke and Kitty


Cute shot, but given the way the cat has been cropped by the bottom of the frame I'd suggest a tighter crop, showing about the same amount of dog, so it looks more like an intentional close-up rather than a case of not being in the right place at the right time for a better composed wider crop. The body of the dog on the left and open space on the right don't add to the impact of the message, they distract, and the best thing to do with distractions on the edges of photos is to crop them out....







Same message, just edited to isolate the most important part of it.



Nov 15, 2011 at 02:08 AM
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p.1 #3 · Luke and Kitty


Much better...I like that

Jefferson



Nov 15, 2011 at 02:22 AM
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p.1 #4 · Luke and Kitty


Chuck, that crop works really well.
Jefferson, you captured an adorable moment.

Scott



Nov 15, 2011 at 02:41 AM





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