Well, I should have led with my weakest images first. Anyhow, here is another dawn attempt, with a bit more foreground action. I am including a downsized unprocessed version and my latest attempt.
Again, I appreciate the direct comments, reworks so lets see what you all think and do!
With a long exposure like this I have seen some good results when you pop off a few manual flashes to fill in the foreground. You are pulling up info from really dark shadow areas without it. either that or an exposure blend.
This is nice but my guess is that the foreground is pretty noisy if viewed larger.