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p.1 #1 · #448 Friday Night Lights


I guess we really enjoy going around in circles ....






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May 07, 2011 at 04:09 AM
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p.1 #2 · #448 Friday Night Lights


Great idea for the assignment!

I love all the lights. That thing on the right looks like some sort of strange wormhole into the unknown.

In terms of composition, it feels just a little bit "flat" to me...things seem to cluster just above the horizontal center-line. I'm not sure if there is any way to avoid that and still keep all of the whirligigs in play.

-eager



May 07, 2011 at 02:39 PM
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p.1 #3 · #448 Friday Night Lights


Eager ... thanks.

I had to use 2 CP's (faux ND), and lowest ISO possible to get a long enough exposure for the 'wormhole'. I struggled with the comp a bit myself, so I know what you mean about the 'flat' thing. Despite all the 'motion', it still has a 'static' feel to it ... but I just wasn't able to get them to move the carousel where I really wanted it.

I cropped it some to move the center line. I think it helped some. Thanks for the C&C.

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May 07, 2011 at 04:20 PM
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p.1 #4 · #448 Friday Night Lights


I think this will be top contender this week because it has a great mix of color and motion. Motionadds a lot to shots like this.


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p.1 #5 · #448 Friday Night Lights


Awesome idea. I really love all the motion. I agree somewhat about the flat comment. I'm wondering if a late evening deep indigo sky as a backdrop might have helped instead of the solid black? Nevertheless, I really like this entry a lot. Good luck!


May 08, 2011 at 06:37 PM
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p.1 #6 · #448 Friday Night Lights


Nicely done. I agree with the others, the motion makes it work. Steve


May 10, 2011 at 12:31 AM
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p.1 #7 · #448 Friday Night Lights


It looks like still motion. I'd like to see the blur -to see the motion. It's a great shot - don't get me wrong -if you intended it to be a little lifeless.

I love all the colors and the choice of your position when taking the shot. How perfect for this assignment!



May 11, 2011 at 03:01 AM





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