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Archive 2008 · Fence Work

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Fence Work


A bit different for me.
Inspired by Kaden, I am trying to loosen up a bit, get a bit more creative.
But do they work and if so which one(s) and why?
Could use all the critical feedback I can get.

All taken yesterday at the Cape Cod National Seashore.

Thx
Scott G


Edited on Aug 30, 2008 at 08:50 PM



Aug 30, 2008 at 08:49 PM
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p.1 #2 · Fence Work


I like the first best but the flash shadow (from your lens and flash?) bugs me. I think shifting the lens left to get the line of the fence would make it more visually attractive and not to the platform because it is so small and distracts.

3rd is my next best because I like the drama of the breaking waves through the fence but I am not fond of the softness.

2 has a truncated fence that is not nearly as good as the first.

I am not good at way out there processing so I leave to Kaden to comment suffice to say I like his 2nd version but not last.



Aug 31, 2008 at 06:17 PM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #3 · Fence Work


Way out there ?!? Oh geezz, that's usually my expertise...lol.
Yeap, short on predictable platitudes.

Edited on Aug 31, 2008 at 07:09 PM



Aug 31, 2008 at 07:05 PM
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p.1 #4 · Fence Work


Hi Scott,

Nice work, but I have to agree with Scott S about the flash.

Walking on the wild side, I really like Kaden's renditions of #1 & #2.

Bob

Edited on Aug 31, 2008 at 07:13 PM



Aug 31, 2008 at 07:13 PM
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p.1 #5 · Fence Work


I like the drama of Kaden's version of number 1.


Sep 02, 2008 at 07:06 PM
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p.1 #6 · Fence Work


Kaden,
Thanks for playing, illustrating. I like your first re-work the best. Second is very interesting. What are we seeing along the lower edge?
Scott



Sep 03, 2008 at 06:27 PM
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p.1 #7 · Fence Work


Bob, Karen, thanks for your comments.

Scott



Sep 03, 2008 at 06:28 PM
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p.1 #8 · Fence Work


The film edge re-worked.


Sep 03, 2008 at 08:45 PM





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