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p.1 #1 · blue chevy




taken with an 30d and a cheap 50mm 1.8

Edited on May 19, 2008 at 09:54 PM



May 19, 2008 at 09:53 PM
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p.1 #2 · blue chevy


Great gear, I just think this shot could use a re-shoot. First, the reflection in the bumper distracts, the pole and background doesn't compliment the car at all, and lastly, the perspective of your shot doesn't show off the uniqueness of the actual car. Maybe try a different angle and wait longer for the sun to come down so that you get a much better lighting on it. Always take note to the backgrounds in your shots along with how the light reflects showing up other objects you don't want (example is when shooting people with glasses on, you usually pick up yourself in their glasses taking the shot) Keep on working

Steve R




May 19, 2008 at 09:58 PM
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p.1 #3 · blue chevy


It is a good subject - strong colors, like the lines leading away down the street behind. At another time of the day it would be great.

But high noon means really strong shadows with lost details, bright reflections and washed out sidewalk.

This picture with same framing would be great in the twilight.



May 19, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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p.1 #4 · blue chevy




redone it hows this?



May 19, 2008 at 11:47 PM
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p.1 #5 · blue chevy


It is close enough to a car while being clearly a car and for me just looks way oversaturated. If you were to go to what Bob Jarden did in his post of his truck and make it over the top artistic (in 2nd post of recent) it would be better for me. As is it just looks oversaturated for me.


May 20, 2008 at 11:41 PM
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p.1 #6 · blue chevy


First is too saturated.
Second is over-the-top too saturated!

Scott G



May 21, 2008 at 02:30 PM





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