Very nice try. The first one indeed makes her look great. The pose in the second is not that good and makes her look bigger then she is. Clone out the spot on her elbow and the brawstrap. 3 is nice but for this shot I dont like her clothing. The last would be better if she was slightly more turned towards the camera I feel. The rearlighting which makes her hair look like it is on fire I could do without also. Also clone out the spot on her arm here.
Hope this doesnt sound too harsh. I think you did a ok job and especially the first is great.
Thanks for all the feedback. For the last one, I really don't know why I used the rimlight, probably just because I felt obligated to use all my gear haha.
