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Jake Kenney Offline Image Upload: Off My backyard. I finally got somebody to model for me. I like the results, what do you guys think? http://flickr.com/jake_kenney/ May 11, 2008 at 11:52 PM

tol105 Offline Image Upload: Off My backyard. I really like the lighting on the first one. Definitely my favorite. Also enjoy the second one. Nice work. May 11, 2008 at 11:58 PM

dtfuzzy Offline Image Upload: On My backyard. Ya 1 and 2 are the best maybe 3 would work if her arm was down its kind of OOF for me. Dave May 12, 2008 at 12:10 AM

SJMD Offline Image Upload: Off My backyard. The first one does a great job of making your model look good. May 12, 2008 at 02:09 AM

Robert Pole Offline Image Upload: Off My backyard. Very nice. She has a very mischievious look in #1. #3 the arm isn't lit, so it looks just a bit odd. Very lovley model, good shots otherwise. May 12, 2008 at 03:58 AM

paulhodson Offline Image Upload: On My backyard. I like the first - the others not so much. Maybe a little cool? Look a little oversharpened. May 12, 2008 at 05:43 AM

MarnixdS Offline Image Upload: Off My backyard. Hi Jake, Very nice try. The first one indeed makes her look great. The pose in the second is not that good and makes her look bigger then she is. Clone out the spot on her elbow and the brawstrap. 3 is nice but for this shot I dont like her clothing. The last would be better if she was slightly more turned towards the camera I feel. The rearlighting which makes her hair look like it is on fire I could do without also. Also clone out the spot on her arm here. Hope this doesnt sound too harsh. I think you did a ok job and especially the first is great. Regards Marnix May 12, 2008 at 09:57 AM

Jake Kenney Offline Image Upload: Off My backyard. Thanks for all the feedback. For the last one, I really don't know why I used the rimlight, probably just because I felt obligated to use all my gear haha. May 12, 2008 at 07:25 PM

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