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p.1 #1 · Tooth Powder

You can also view a larger version. Thanks for looking.

May 08, 2008 at 02:40 AM

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p.1 #2 · Tooth Powder

Very nice! I think I would have cropped in to the right to eliminate the ?parking islands? at the edge of the frame. The picture is strong enough that cutting a bit from the edge of the building would diminish the picture less than the distraction of those things.

Excellent conversion, nice composition. I love old buildings like this.

<Chas>

May 08, 2008 at 06:18 PM

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p.1 #3 · Tooth Powder

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I played around with cloning those out, but it looked a little artificial and I gave it up. I will try cropping them out. You're probably right, especially as I've already cropped out a good deal of the building on the left.

May 09, 2008 at 03:23 PM


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