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p.1 #1 · Never too old

took this one Sunday at the park, I dont know who they were i just thought that it looked so cool that they were trying to fly a kite

Nikon D40 with a 55-200mm lens, no croping, all in Manual mode, some color corection in photoshop, and A LOT or trial and error. Enjoy!

Apr 08, 2008 at 02:00 PM

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p.1 #2 · Never too old

Morning,

Nice shot. Just my two cents but perhaps crop a bit off the top and bottom to bring them in "closer" and also while I realize the kite needs string just for some reason troubled by the fact that it comes off the bottom of the kite and goes down and seems to disappear into the grass then then reappears on her pant leg. I would be tempted to remove all visible string from her pants.

Again just my two cents....like the shot and their concentration on the kite etc!

thanks for sharing

Apr 08, 2008 at 02:11 PM

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p.1 #3 · Never too old

It is perhaps too contrasty with both the whites blown and the shadows blocked. If you shot Raw you might improve it in conversion, if not, shadow/highlight might be good

Apr 08, 2008 at 04:41 PM

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p.1 #4 · Never too old

great compostition, I think the brights are blown out tho.

Edited on Apr 08, 2008 at 04:46 PM

Apr 08, 2008 at 04:46 PM


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