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Mar 31, 2008 at 05:55 PM

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Should I add a salt pile or make the aspirin more obvious?

Mar 31, 2008 at 05:56 PM

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I think there is just a bit too much contrast - I like the concept, think I'll go get a beer.

cheers,

Bob

Mar 31, 2008 at 07:54 PM

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p.1 #4 · Critique #288 For every action...

I will rework it with less contrast and post that to see if it works better.
Thanks for the feedback.

Mar 31, 2008 at 08:46 PM


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