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Chris Cooke
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p.1 #1 · Melissa & Russ E-pics (c&c please)


I havent posted on her much especially with pics, but I feel I need to start getting some critiques to help me better myself. Here are 4 from an engagement shoot I did in Calistoga on Monday. They were 2 hours late and we have very limited time to shoot so hopefully I got some good ones!

C&C more than welcome!






Yes...they were a very affectionate couple!!



Oct 08, 2008 at 02:34 PM
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p.1 #2 · Melissa & Russ E-pics (c&c please)


WTF is a Solbar?


Oct 08, 2008 at 02:40 PM
Manuel Guerrer
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p.1 #3 · Melissa & Russ E-pics (c&c please)


Sol = Sol is the Latin name of the Sun, and the modern word for "Sun" in Spanish, Portuguese, Catalan, Icelandic (sól), Danish, Norwegian and Swedish. In Persian, it refers to a "solar year".


BAR = Bar may refer to:

A rod/stick, pole, or handrail made of structural steel
Grab bar
Rebar
an ingot or gold bar
Bar (diacritic), a line through a letter used as a diacritic
Bar (establishment), a retail establishment which serves alcoholic beverages
Bar (counter), the counter from which drinks are dispensed



Oct 08, 2008 at 03:25 PM
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p.1 #4 · Melissa & Russ E-pics (c&c please)


Ahh, thank you.

Chris - relooking at the images, my crit is going to be pretty lame, so I'll apologize now - but I just don't feel connected to the shots. I mean, it's like in almost all the shots, I want to step closer..I don't 'feel' the shots..like a BW film shot without grain, if that makes any sense.

Sorry, I wish I could be more helpful.



Oct 08, 2008 at 04:19 PM
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p.1 #5 · Melissa & Russ E-pics (c&c please)


Hey Chris, the shots are nice and the set ups are good. But they are doing basically the same thing in all four. I would like to see a bit of variety in what they are doing.
Sweet palm tree



Oct 09, 2008 at 12:37 AM
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p.1 #6 · Melissa & Russ E-pics (c&c please)


jeremy.... that's it... you're worthless and your fired from the FM forum.

back to the TOOBZ with you !

looks like these were shot in the bright of day... 2 hours late and didn't give you much time to shoot with them... THEN they are THIS affectionate? I don't get it... doesn't add up..

I see the off camera flash work... good fill - is that the shadow from your light stand pole in the lower right of "solbar" shot?

I like the pp on the palm tree shot...

- travis



Oct 09, 2008 at 12:52 AM





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