Archive 2008 · Backlit Leaves

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p.1 #1 · Backlit Leaves

Hello. This is my first FM post.
Most of my work is now digital but, the B&W process is still worth the effort. Plus I love my 1V. It can't be left on the shelf. Film is FP4. C&C is appreciated. Thanks. -Tom

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Another. I wish had been my first.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3091/2913988808_aaa6dfb10f_o.jpg

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Oct 04, 2008 at 10:57 AM

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p.1 #2 · Backlit Leaves

Excellent tonal range but very busy composition, I'm finding the background very distracting. Maybe a tighter crop on this one?

Oct 04, 2008 at 11:04 AM

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p.1 #3 · Backlit Leaves

Thank you Steven for the comments. I can see now where cropping the right-most background tree would be an improvement. And I suppose a little digital dodging on the left tree might be good, too. Thanks.

Oct 04, 2008 at 08:37 PM


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