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Andrew K
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p.1 #1 · Rose


Any advice on how to better?







Nov 17, 2007 at 11:39 AM
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p.1 #2 · Rose


Interesting light. Nice composition. I would increase your aperture to get more depth of field on the flower, especially the front. My general rule is if you are going for the shallow depth of field make it way more intentional and make the composition work accordingly. Otherwise make the whole image in focus. When areas are just a little out of focus the perception is that it's not intentional but a mistake.


Nov 17, 2007 at 02:18 PM
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p.1 #3 · Rose


Nice pic.You might try a bnw and this would be a nice pic for a thank you card or something like that.See below
-Jim


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Nov 17, 2007 at 05:17 PM
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p.1 #4 · Rose


Very pretty colors. Nice framing. It feels a little soft to me. I would try more sharpening.


Nov 18, 2007 at 01:07 PM
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p.1 #5 · Rose


thanks for the help, sorry i didnt reply sooner tech issues. I'll work on the sharpening and post it soon.


Nov 21, 2007 at 03:34 PM





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